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Allison and The Cool New Spaceship Body by tempo321
Allison and The Cool New Spaceship Body
Some of you may have been wondering where I've been the last few months. I entered a special husky-fluff cocoon and emerged as a kids' book author! (Romance is so 2014. ; P)

I was teaching a class on interactive fiction and needed an example of what you can do in the genre with an engine like Twine, so I drew upon a setting I've been toying with for years. A friend of mine mentioned that there's very little good young adult sci-fi for girls, so I figured I'd try making it a kids' gamebook. If you remember Choose Your Own Adventure books from when you were a kid, that's basically what this is.

Actual game:
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I've been consulting some of the world's leading experts on gamebooks (as well as my loyal editors) and now I'm ready for some public feedback. (Not to worry—it's furry!)

The story is currently 30,000 words long across 191 pages. Aside from the cover image, the rest of the art's just placeholders for now. The eventual plan is to release this as an e-book and possibly a physical book.

Feedback wanted! ^_^

If you find any typos, just copy the words around it so I can search it out. I'm also looking for what you want to see more of.

P.S. - ThinkTank Games is the company I worked with on the Nordguard game. We've been working on another little project too, which I'll announce soon...
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My name is Tempe O'Kun. I am the author of the novel Sixes Wild: Manifest Destiny and the comic book Sixes Wild: The Bluff, as well as nearly a hundred short stories both online and in print anthologies. I am also the lead designer for Sofawolf Press's new project Nordguard: The Card Game.

If you'd like to see more of my work, please check out my main gallery here:
www.furaffinity.net/user/tempo…

Breathe deep, seek peace. : )
-Tempo

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copper9lives Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Professional General Artist

Hello, and welcome to Literature-Anonymous! :wave:


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lordmegi Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
Thank you for the watch! (´∇`)ノ :heart:
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FeanorKelsick Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I like ur stories
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marximonto Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Hi! I wanna read a story you made about this pic anacita.deviantart.com/art/Goo… , but the page dosent let me.
There any chance you can upload it in fanfiction.net? Please!
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tempo321 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Well, it's a collab with the owner of the characters, rather than fan art, so I'm not sure it's allowed on FF. But you should be able to view it on SoFurry without an account: www.sofurry.com/view/496215

And here's another one Ana and I did together: www.sofurry.com/view/337333

Let me know what you think! : ) I can certainly get you more links or even just text files.
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marximonto Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
0//////0 I love it.
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tempo321 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
I have dozens more stories like it. tempo.sofurry.com/ You can make an account for free and read them all. It's basically a more specific dA or FF. : )
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Etr0sKnight Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Hello, I made a dub of one of your comics, if you don't mind! I credited you in the video and the description of course. If you're not okay with it, I can surely take it down! Thanks :D www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1bXk4…
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tempo321 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Just watched it. :D Sounds great! Not a bad Fluttershy, if I do say so. Feel free to check out the rest of my work and let me know if you make any others!
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